Thursday, January 26, 2012

The Mix Up


Authors note: I’m writing this to tell you how good it is.
                                              The mix up
In the book thank you ma’am is a very good piece it is very good my favorite part it’s when she puts him in the headlock. It is very good but what you don’t know is the twist. The twist is the boy tries to steal this women pocketbook but she doesn’t call the cops she puts him in a headlock and she was going to let him go but she doesn’t because she doesn’t want him to run. So she keeps him and brings him back to the house.

When they get back to the house she tells him to go wash his face because it is dirty and he doesn’t have a home. So when he goes to the bathroom he thinks about running but he doesn’t. He washes his face and he walks back out. The twist was when she brought him home and didn’t call the cops. Then he doesn’t decide to take the pocketbook and run he walks back into the room to see what she is doing.

When she gives him food and something to drink that was weird because he just tries to take her pocketbook and know she feeding him. In the end the boy got the blue sway shoes he wants which was really nice of her.

I think this is one of the nicest women the kid could meet. I think it was really sweet that he gave him money to buy his blue sway shoes. This is one of the sweatiest things ever.  

Tuesday, January 17, 2012

book analysis

In my book MY BROTHER SAM IS DEAD Sam goes off to the war and while Sam is off fighting in the war his dad is taken prisoner and he  dies on the boat ride.  Sam comes home he is accused of stealing his own cattle he was sentenced to death was shot 5 times and died. I think you should read this if you like sad endings.