great things
Parties
and cookies they’re the best. Parties you always have friends come over and you
have plenty of food like cookies. They taste so good and your friends will
enjoy them as much as you. Parties they keep you active and you’re always with
your friends. You get all these gifts and when you open the expression and your
face is so great because your friends know they got you something good.
Cookies
are especially good at parties they make your guest feel good. I know you have had
a cookie how’d you like it? Did you like it because every cookie is good? Parties are great to your friends the present
and the scary movie at the end of the night. Then when you wake up the fresh
smell of food you and your friends walk up the stairs. What’s that smell its fresh
bacon and pancakes.
I like how you started out with exactley what you were going to talk about but i thought it could have used a little more detail. Overall very nice job.
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