Main conflict

authors note: I wrote this to get kids intrested in my book. This book has it ups and downs of this stroy. But it is a good book.

Does your household have hate in it well in my book my brother Sam is dead there is a lot of hate. I mean why would you hate someone when you can love them. You are a family why would you want to break that apart. That were my book comes in his father hates his son Sam. He disrespected his son he yelled at his son he had hurtful thoughts by his dad I mean who does that to their son.

            My book main conflict is anger and the attitude put tords someone. His father thinks of Sam as a piece of garbage. Well this kid all he wanted was freedom for his friends and family who wouldn’t want that. Well in the beginning of the book you can tell his dad is mad because he smashes his fist in the table then smacks Sam. I think this started when he was a younger boy. I think Sam would have made his life better but then he dies.

            I think this anger was never resolved because Sam was never home. He would always fight with his son was yelled at and he got mad when his dad yelled at him. I think Sam would have tried to get a better connection with his dad but then Sam ended up getting shot. But I think they were going to get tight and then he got killed and that was really sad.

Authors note: I’m writing this to get my friends interested in my book.
                                                

                                   Families and friends at war

 

Do you have friends or even family in the war? Well in my book a young boy goes off to war and he is fighting for his life. Do you fight for your friends and your family’s freedom well that’s what this boy fights for his. He fights even though his father doesn’t want him to fight. He is always disappointed with his son and he gets mad at his father.   

This book is about how a young boy who always wanted to be in the war and his dream came true. His parents thought it was good until his father figured out who he was fighting for it wasn’t the British he fought for the Minutemen. They fought bloody war and his father thought it was a disgrace because his son was fighting his own people. But all he wanted was freedom for his people and his father didn’t get that.

Were I am my prediction is that Sam dies and I don’t really think his father cares that he dies and it’s sad. I think that his father won’t care that he died and his wife and son will be devastated. But his dad was such a jerk to him and he was just disappointed in his son and that is terrible. Why did his father have to be such a jerk to him he didn’t do anything wrong he just joined up with the wrong team from his point of view.

I think this book you should read because it keeps bring up new ideas. It shows one person can make bad decision and I think that was his father. I think this book is very interesting and it talks about what happened during the war. I think this book talks about some problems that you might have with your friends and family but Sam stud up for both of them and his father didn’t care. That is why this book is pretty sad I think.                                                        

Authors note: The author’s purpose for righting this is to show you the real definition of family. You don’t always have to be biologically family members; it’s the love you share with one another.

The Hopes of a Family

We have had those days where you’re down, mad, or even sad. That’s the thing, we all have those feeling, but there’s always a family to make you happy. Family gets you through things just like in the Outsiders. The Greasers real families died or didn’t care about them and that’s when they got a new life by being a greaser.

First of all, while many people mistreat the Greasers, they are a great example of how families stick together. Like when bob was trying to kill Ponyboy when Johnny showed up and saved Ponyboy and Johnny ended up killing bob. There is also the one were Johnny and Ponyboy help each other and they also save the children.  Then Johnny happened to get by a falling beam and one of his friends came to save him.

 Also, the Greasers are an example of how a family protects one another, no matter what. When Johnny killed Bob Dally was there to get Johnny and Ponyboy out of site so they wouldn’t be beat up or even killed. Also Dally saved Johnny and Ponyboy from the burning church it was because he loved them and wanted them to be safe. He did this because he cared about both of them.

Johnny treats everyone like a family except his parents his parents don’t like him they don’t even care for him. That’s why he cares for everyone else because he knew that his parents didn’t treat him with respect, so he decided to treat everyone with respect.

Dally never really had a family his parent died while he was going to school. Then when his parents died he wanted to watch after his brothers so he decided to drop out of school and stick to his family and that was his brothers.

I think the outsider shows the problems between the greasers they never really had anyone to love or to care for them until they became greasers. I think if the greasers kept make smart decisions they would be a really good family. 

Authors note: The author’s purpose for righting this is to show you the real definition of family. You don’t always have to be biologically family members; it’s the love you share with one another.

The Hopes of a Family

We have had those days where you’re down, mad, or even sad. That’s the thing, we all have those feeling, but there’s always a family to make you happy. Family gets you through things just like in the Outsiders. The Greasers real families died or didn’t care about them and that’s when they got a new life by being a greaser. This is a book of great things and I’m going to tell you about it. A major theme of this story is family and I will explain how.

I think the greasers are one big happy family, this book talks about the different type of people. There are the Socs and the Greasers. Socs are the people that think they are better than the Greasers. They are believed to be perfect because they are wealthier. Greasers are family, not biologically, but friends that think they are a family and I do to. These friends are treated like crap in the town, but they stick by each other’s sides every step of the way. These guys bring each other up when they are down. They always got each other’s backs and always protect each other.

I think what family means to the greasers is your never left out even if your family doesn’t care about you. They never leave anyone of their kind out. They want to be there for everyone. I think the greasers are happy that more than one person loves them. I think they are also graceful to have a family like that, one that cares so much about you and everyone else who is part of the Greasers. I think that everyone knew that Johnny cared about them but then he passed away and the Greasers were devastated.

I think greasers are a family and would never break apart because they can stick together. They need each other, they protect each other, and don’t give up on one another. They have each other’s back because they don’t disappoint each other. They keep on growing and nobody slows them down because they care for each other. They don’t care what others think of them, just of what they think of each other.

I think it is worth it to keep them together. They make each other happy. their crew will always stick together. I think the Greasers will stay together their whole life. I think if they split up, they would have so many problems. But this is why I think the Greasers are family. They fought for each other and worked to stride for their goals and I think they are meant to be together. The bond they share is unbelievable. They fill each other with joy and they keep fighting for each other. This why I think this is a theme of family.

Outline

1. Talks about the ups and downs of family.
2. The main groups and how perfect socs are.
3. The meaning of family to greasers
4. The reason why I think they will stick together.
5. Conclusion

Authors note: I’m going to right about the definition of family. Because I love to spend time with my family and so do the greasers.

The Hopes of a Family

We have had those days were your down, mad, or even sad. That’s the thing we all have those feeling but their always a family to make you happy. Family gets you through things just like in the Outsiders. Their real families died or didn’t care about them and that’s when they got a new life by being a greaser. This is a book of great things and I’m going to tell you about it.

I think the greasers are one big happy family, this book talks about the different type of people there are the socs and the greasers. Socs are the people that beat up greasers and they perfect. Greasers is a family not a real family but friends that think they are a family and I do to. These friends are treated like crap in the town but they stick by each other’s sides every step of the way. These guys bring each other up when they are down. They always got each other back and always protect each other.

I think what family means to the greasers is your never left out even if your family doesn’t care about you. They never leave anyone of their kind out. They want to be there for everyone. I think the greasers are happy that more than one person loves them. I think they are also graceful to have a family like that cares so much about you. I think that everyone knew that Johnny cared about them but then he passed away and the team got sad.

Authors note: I wrote this to help me relies what type of person Johnny is. This is about character development.

The Ways of Johnny

Johnny is my favorite character because of his personality. He is the head leader he loves everyone. He always wants to protect his team. He won’t even hurt but when he killed bob that was for self defense. I think Johnny love’s everyone because he wants to know what love is he was never loved so he loves others. Johnny cares about everyone in his clan he doesn’t like his parent at all. His team has hopes and dreams but those were crushed when Johnny died. I think his team was really upset when he died and sad because he was one of their leaders and he passed away with his team in the hospital.

Authors note: I wrote this because it’s one of my favorite sports. I love it and it my favorite thing to do.

My Heart and Soul  

Do you like the satisfaction of winning?

Do you like hard work? I dot I can that.

Do you like to pummel people without getting it trouble?

 Famous wrestler and Coach Dan Gable once said that “gold medals aren’t made of gold; they are made of sweet determination or lots of guts.”

Wrestling has its ups and downs. As any sport would. There are many things to like and many things to dislike for instance. Meet new people, make new friends, and have some good times wining.

But then there are the bad times. Working hard and sweating all the fluids out of your body. Hoping for a sip of water in the 2 ½ hours of drilling and wrestling as hard as you can. Treating everyone like your enemy on the mat .what happens on the matt stays on the mat.  But when off the mat treat them like best of friends.  That is one unique think about wrestling is that you can pick on people but you remain friends.

After all of that drilling you have to watch your weight which sucks that is the worst part about it. You can’t eat you can stay awake during class and when you get home from practice your too tired to do anything else.  When you’re watching your weight if you are over what is going to happen is getting your running shoes and running in snow or rain just to burn off the weight you have put on. When you’re running in the rain your socks get all wet and you start to get blisters on your feet and that not fun at all. Also Mornings are tough to, waking up at 500 just to go lift weights at 600 and then having school right after is not fun at all.

They day of the meets your all dress up looking good. At school that’s all you can think about is the meet your dazing off during class.

Then it is the weight INS hopping you made your weight.  You step on the scale watching it go up and down then boom its. You made it a sigh of relief. After you’re done with that you sit down and have a big snack like subway or something of that sort.

Then you step out of the locker room and you see everyone in the stands and you look over to see who you’re wrestling try to think what he is going to do.  Then you start to warm up thinking about what you’re going to do during your match. You start to warm up. Get all pumped and that sort of stuff.

Then meet starts your waiting until you have to go.

When you step on to the mat everything goes silent. You are ready to go when the referee say shake hands has you do that you stare your opponent in the eyes. Try to make him scared. Then the whistle blows. You are thinking about what to do and what he is going to do. Then you see something open and you take it. For a split second it can be the winning moments or the losing moment but you have to take risk. If you win it feels like the greatest thing in the world but if you loss you can’t even stand to look at anyone you just want to be in a punching the wall as hard as you can just to get all of your anger out.

But then there are the bad times. Working hard and sweating all the fluids out of your body. Hoping for a sip of water in the 2 ½ hours of drilling and wrestling as hard as you can. Treating everyone like your enemy on the mat .what happens on the matt stays on the mat.  But when off the mat treat them like best of friends.  That is one unique think about wrestling is that you can pick on people but you remain friends.

After all of that drilling you have to watch your weight which sucks that is the worst part about it. You can’t eat you can stay awake during class and when you get home from practice your too tired to do anything else.  When you’re watching your weight if you are over what is going to happen is getting your running shoes and running in snow or rain just to burn off the weight you have put on. When you’re running in the rain your socks get all wet and you start to get blisters on your feet and that not fun at all. Also Mornings are tough to, waking up at 500 just to go lift weights at 600 and then having school right after is not fun at all.

But after all of that you have to go back and work harder next week in practice to improve and get better to win. This is why I believe that wrestling is the toughest sport.   

This is why wrestling is one of my favorite sports you enjoy hanging with friends. You win medals you can lose matches but you still have fun and never know what can happen.

  

                                             Austin Shibilski

OUTLINE FOR WRITING PIECE:

1.       Introduction/series of questions

a.       Quote

b.      Thesis statement:

2.       First of all, (FIRST REASON WHY WRESTLING IS GREAT)

a.       You meet friends

b.       

3.        Possibly a paragraph here describing that there are some bad aspects,

4.       Conclusion